Feeding Time or Feed Me Now!

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Description

Baby Baltimore orioles are obnoxious and follow any oriole around until they get feed. Grape jelly is the entree for this one and the male works hard to keep the youngster satiated.

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I may want to take a little from the RH side to balance the comp. What do you think?

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Z9 600mm f4 (1/1600 sec at f10, ISO 1000) DeNoise, Levels, Shadows & Highlights, Brightness & Contrast…Jim

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Great interaction here!
Fine detail and nice BG
I think cropping some off the right would improve this.

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I think a centered composition would work just fine for this action, Jim. You could take a tad off the top and/or bottom to maintain the aspect ratio or even go to a slightly long/narrow ratio given the subject poses.