Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
This felt like flowing water to me rather than sand (this is at White Sands National Park).
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Nothing specifically.
Technical Details
Fuji X-H2S, 1/160s, f/13, ISO 100, 205mm
Nik Silver Efex for the black and white transformation, motion blur.
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The grasses show up very well against the rippled sand, Debbie. While it was probably not possible, getting the sand ripples to fill the frame would have been a good improvement. BTW, it looks like you posted two photo on the same day. NPN has asked that we limit ourselves to one post per day.
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@Mark_Seaver Oh - sorry about that! Thanks for the advice, I don’t think I have a better shot of these ripples and plant.
I just now checked you image folder and saw this image. I really like it. The simplicity and the Tone really speaks to me. B&W photography is my favorite and I think you captured your vision. In photoshop you might burn the ripples a little… Thats just an idea… Its really nice just like it is … Well Done … How do you like Silver Efex. Thinking of getting the software as a plugin.
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@gill Thank you! I really like the Nik color filters including Silver Efex, I’m using the Photoshop plugin.
