Incoming Tide, Cape Kiawanda, Oregon

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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

I straddled te incoming tide balancing my trip[pod on the rocks. I wanted to reveal the force of the incoming tide among the rocks with the landmasses in the background.

Specific Feedback

Did I accomplish my goal? Would you have exposed the water differently?

Technical Details

This was photographed on medium format Ilford Super 400 film 25+ years ago. The negative was scanned and digitally printed.All the specific exposure data is lost to memory.

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Paul: One of my favorite places on the coast. I do like your SS choice that gives the water some smooth movement but still picks up a small surf splash. Well conceived, captured and presented. >=))>

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Nice treatment of this scene in BW Paul. It shows the nice smooth water of the incoming tide with the power of the waves against the rocks. No way I could straddle those slippery rocks these days. . . .

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Thank you. A special place indeed. I was just traveling the coast with my wife and happened to stay there for a day/night. Blind luck.

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Appreciate your input. I was much younger then with better balance. Plus with film, I didn’t know what I captured until I got back home in Massachusetts.

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YES !!! You accomplished your goal. I love this style of photography and you nailed it. !!! Beautiful image !!!

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Thank you for the encouragement. Since this was photographed with film, I did not know if I was successful until I returned home from my trip.