Last 4 from Hawaii - New Order

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Zebra Dove

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Golden Plover on the Beach

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Myna on Palm Trunk

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Saffron Finch

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OK, these are the last four I’ll post from our Hawaii trip earlier this month. Thank you for bearing with me on all of these. I finally got one in a tree (of sorts) and on the sand (at the edge of the grass). The Saffron Finch is a new one for my wife and I.

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  1. Canon R6Mii, f7.1, 1/1250s, iso 1000, 500 mm.
  2. R6Mii, f5.6, 1/1000s, iso 1000, 324 mm.
  3. R6Mii, f7.1, 1/800 s, iso 125, -1 ev, 100-500 at 500 mm.
  4. R6Mii, f8, 1/1000s, iso 125, -1 ev, 500 mm.

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I’ve been enjoying your series from Hawaii. This is a great set. My favorite is the Golden Plover.

Cheers,
David

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A nice set of images, Ed. I’ll agree with David on the plover being my favorite.

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Nice catches Ed - a fine series. All look good to me. I think the Zebra dove is my favorite.

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Real nice set of images here Ed. I also think the Zebra Dove Is my favorite. We really gotta do something about getting these birds off the grass and Into some nice perches. For a grass shot, the saffron finch looks pretty good.

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Great series, Ed. The little Zebra doves are just precious , and their soft call is very soothing to me.
I’m sorry this is the last of your Hawaii images - they were all fine shots.

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Thank you @David_Bostock, @David_Schoen David, @Dennis_Plank, @Allen_Sparks and @SandyR-B.

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I can tell you had a GREAT time in Hawaii because you took a lot of really GREAT shots. I can only imagine. I like the Dove and the little colorful finch. Thanks for all the shots from your trip. :smiley:

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