The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
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my 2nd camera
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anything helpful
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David, I agree with @Dennis_Plank on the lattice effect or affect casting across the scene. Provides a unique impression on the image. The old Nikkor looks in fine shape whenever this was photographed here…
I had all Nikon 35mm stuff before moving to MF & LF. The stuff was excellent quality overall…
Old cameras, to me, are like works of art and I particularly love old Nikon cameras. I like this photo, and I think the lines running across the back wall add to the lines on the camera itself. My only comment woulkd be the wood panel on the left side of the photo looks a bit discolored. My eye immediately was drawn to lighter coloring of that panel so that may be something to fix, if possible. Otherwise, great photo of a great camera!