Northern Mockingbird

I liked this mainly for the background and setting.

What technical feedback would you like if any? Any

What artistic feedback would you like if any? Any

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Canon 7DII; Sigma 150-600 at 600 mm; 1/1000 at f7.1; ISO 640

Hi @Allen_Brooks. While I like the soft completely OOF background the foreground doesn’t work for me. I could imagine moving a few feet to the right (if feasible and possible) to use the bush on the left as a compositional element. It also feels very tight in the frame as presented.

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The foreground works alright for my taste, Allen, though the one tuft on the left is a bit of a distraction. It definitely feels crowded on the left to me. I like the lighting.

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