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Description
A serendipitous catch as I drove toward the beach hoping for some stellar fog shots. I did get some, but in the end, this emerged as my favorite of the day.
Specific Feedback
I’m game for whatever.
Technical Details
Nikon D810, Tokina 17-35 @ 32mm
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The richness of tones looks wonderful. I also like the idea of the tree and the sun peering through the mist. The only suggestion is that I wish was to the right of the tree. One thing I would try is to make a 4x5 vertical with the tree centered. I say that because I remember an Ansel Adams oak shot to great effect in that manner. The rule of thirds doesn’t work for me in this image. However, tomorrow is another day and I could see things differently.
Thanks, Igor. I generally don’t adhere to any specific cropping plan, square, rule of thirds or otherwise. However, in this case I liked how the reflection of the ground water pushed the eye back to the sun. I will give the suggested crop a shot.
I can see why it was a favorite, the strong contrast and the sun in the tree composition are striking. I too vote for a 4x5 crop, but I’d go horizontal.
Serendipitous or not you captured a wonderful peaceful mood with this B&W landscape Chris. the placement of the sun is perfect and I like the way the water in the field directs the viewer to the lone tree and the rising sun. I know you mentioned that you don’t stick to any specific cropping plan, but I could see a little crop from both the left and right sides. I hope you don’t mind but here is a repost with what I was thinking. Just my opinion of course.
Ed, this is pretty close to where I got last night. I will wait one more day before making a final crop. So far, everyone’s suggestions have given me pause to reconsider.
Chris, I am drawn to the mood of the tree, fog, and promise of the sun. The water adds a striking touch to the upright tree.
The original crop gives a lot of weight to the clump of trees to the right, which seem to be part of another scene. I really like the tighter crops. I find the one by @John_Williams to be very compelling. If you wish to keep some of the trees to the right, the crop suggested by @Ed_Lowe has merit. It comes down to your vision and what speaks to you.
It always becomes a conundrum when presented with so many POV. I am still closer to John’s crop but a bit on the fence as to how much to cut off the right side. Thanks for your valuable insight.
