Power Vacuum

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Image Description

This could be seen as the USA in the next 2 months. Or it could be an auditorium. For me, there is a sense of anticipation, as we await a grand entrance from the left corner.

Technical Details

OM-1 + 60mm macro 1/320 f3.2 ISO 200 7 images stacked in Zerene (DMap)

Rotated 90 degrees right and did minor cropping. In PS converted to B & W.

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Good lord this is good.
I’m REALLY jealous of this image, it’s so good. =) I have nothing to say that isn’t positive. It just works!

I.
Love.
This.

That is all.

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@Matt_Payne : Thanks so much - glad you like it, Matt.

Thank you kindly, @Kris_Smith !

Mike, you are on a huge roll with these spider web images. This one is even better than your last two. Amazing! Cool.

Thanks a lot, Ed!

Awesome image, Mike. I’m always so fixated on trying to get it all in focus that it never occurred to shoot at an angle like this. It made for a wonderful geometry and a gorgeous overall image.

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Thank you @Dennis_Plank

Wow, Mike, I really like this. It gives the feel that I am looking down through a tunnel of spider web!

This really caught my eye. Such a perfect web, a rare find. Composition is great with the strong leading line coming in from the LL corner. Super sharp focus on the central area of the web, which is well placed. The droplets are almost too perfect to be real. Great photo.

One of the best spider web images I can remember. Well done, Mike.

Thanks @Shirley_Freeman @Chris_Baird and @David_Bostock . I was pleasantly surprised that the stack came out sharply as even the slightest wind can adversely effect web shots.

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Another excellent EP! Way to go…

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Thank you for the EP.

Late to the party, but I’ll echo what everyone else said - awesome! I get a feeling of rotation, not necessarily a vacuum. More like a whirlpool. Love, love, love the water drop bokeh.

Thank you, Bonnie!

Mike, your dof and contrast here are amazing. Excellent!

Thanks you @Mark_Seaver

Holy cow! This is awesome! Such abstract and … just perfect. Love finding spider webs covered in dew. Nice job!

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