The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Sometimes, you have to recreate the sun on a cloudy, dismal day. Our Holiday amaryllis began to bloom and decided this was going to be a challenging shot due to the overall size and depth of the subject. I used a light tent for overall diffusion of light from the main flash and used the Nikon macro flashes to expose the shadows and BG. Setting the strength of the flashes takes trial and error and to avoid TTL preflash, I chose manual settings for the flashes.
Specific Feedback
How do you like the lighting for this photo?
Technical Details
Z9 60mm f2.8 Micro (1/100sec at f4.0, ISO 64, 5 flashes Main 1/8, shadows 1/132, BG 1/4 power, 30 image stack PMax) Levels, Shadows & Highlights, Rubber stamp tool to smooth out irregularities in BG, Crop for Comp, Adobe Camera Raw for final Highlight and Shadow adjustment, Curves for overall saturation and Contrast, reduction of red saturation in BG.
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Hi Jim. I think maybe a bit more directionality, to create some more shadows would make this image more dramatic. The composition is awesome. I do see a triangular sliver of darker gray in the bottom left corner. Maybe a backdrop that has a bit more variation?
Jim: Great comp of this stage of the bloom and I like the lighting of the flowers and the precision of the stack especially. Knowing how much effort I put in for my rudimentary “studio” work I also applaud the care you took to craft the image. The only thing I’m kind of meh over is the BG. That may reflect my personal bias and preference for either pure or near white or very dark for amaryllis. When I grow up I want to be able to do the stuff you do with flash as to my eye that’s pretty masterful. >=))>
Thank you @Dennis_Plank and @Bill_Fach for your critiques. The image did not turn out as I wanted. Although the flowers look velvety in appearance, the flash brought out a lot of shiny highlights and back-lighting lightened the color. I was trying for a high key presentation, but the over-exposure needed bleached out the colors pretty good. So, I have to engineer a way of supporting the flowers because gravity broke the stem. I engineer something and hope to get a better image for you. I may have an easier time with a black BG to capture the maroon, dark red color of these flowers…Jim
