Rock.

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Low tide on my local beach gives me the view of a “rock” from a breakwater.

Specific Feedback

Please give me feedback on my bnw postproduction in LR and Silver EFX pro.

Technical Details

F4.5 -1.5 sec- ISO 100- 28 mm -


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Nice scene. Looks good in b&w as it emphasizes the swirling shapes and textures very well. Without seeing a histogram, it looks as if the white and black points are where they need to be. I like the line of surf leading to the back of the photo. Good job putting the horizon so high as there isn’t anything interesting in the sky. I find the contrast is good and there is some nice variation showing the wet and dry sand so the monochrome works for me.

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