Synchronous dancing

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I like the play of lines.

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What do you think of the artistic appraoch?

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All feedback is wellcome!

Technical Details

100-400mm, f16, 1/640sec, iso 8000.

Description

Searching for reflections I saw this two graas horsts in the water, so calm and connected to each other!


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It must have been difficult deciding how to crop this - but I think you probably chose the best option. There is a good balance between the more solid clumps and the surrounding stalks. You must have had a very calm day to give you this great chance. Also, the brightness to my eye is controlled enough, but also bright enough to contrast with the solid colors. Add to that the symmetry, and this is really a big success artistically. I wouldn’t change a thing!

Thank you, Mike!

Henry: Extremely well seen IMO and superbly processed. Most excellent. >=))>

So intriguing! Everything really pops with the white background. There is a lot to draw my eye into this image. So many lines and textures. I am quite fascinated.

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Thank you, Bill! Please explain to me the meaning of IMO.

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:+1:Thank you, Bill