Twilight 2

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

This friend of mine just walked away before the shutter was closed on this Tv 3.2 shutter speed image

10-20 mm Lens

Balan Vinod

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any ctitique is welcome

Technical Details

sigma 10 20, f22 , Tv 3.2


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I like the ghostliness of the image, Balan, and the sunset is awesome. I’m a bit ambivalent about the double breath cloud. I’m thinking it might be more effective with just one even though the double image of your friend works wonderfully.

A sunset apparition! Your friend inadvertently help create a very unique photo.

My only suggestion is to greatly reduce the JPEG compression (this file is only 180kb) to reduce the compression artifacts. NPN suggests 1MB on file sizes and allows even larger.

Really interesting photo! Definitely made me stop and look. I love the sunset colors and the uniqueness of it, but I think I agree with @Dennis_Plank on the cloud breath. I would like to see just the person.

It is beautiful though!

Jim …been years since i have heard from you …my bad …thanks for the suggestions

Balan Vinod

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Thanks to each one of you …for your kind words

Balan Vinod