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Went out in the front yard today and cut these 2 little flowers (about 1/2" in diameter). 2 off camera flashes, 1 with a soft box, Olympus EM1-II, 60mm f/2.8 Macro, black foam core background Felt good to push the shutter button!
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These narcissus look good on a black background. I like the shadows on the stems which forces the eyes up to the flowers. Yellows exposed perfectly. I see no reason to throw any nits your way. Well done…Jim
Very natural lighting, Keith, so kudos on your setup. They look really nice against the background. It does feel nice to get out and shoot a little, even in our yards. Nicely done, Keith.
I like the position of the 2 flowers so one is facing the front and the second is more from the side. The background makes the flowers stand out more and your lighting looks perfect.
Keith: Wonderful take on these Narcissus blooms. These are often the first flowers to bloom in our garden every year and ours are long gone and getting ready for next year. Excellent lighting and comp. Top notch shot. >=))>