Yaquina Classic

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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Taken on my first Oregon coast drone trip. Had really nice morning light and good flying conditions. I liked the line of the surf and the cliff face leading to the lighthouse.

Specific Feedback

I’m finding that Luminar does a really good job of bringing up the shadows without a lot of effort. Trying to avoid extreme AI modifications.

Technical Details

DJI Mini 3 Pro
ISO 100, 1/120 @ f1.7, CPL
Processed in LRC, Luminar Neo and PS

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Bill, I agree that the leading line of the surf does a fine job of pulling my eyes to the light house and then on into the distance. The greenness of the water “feels” slightly overdone, but I wasn’t there. I’m thoroughly enjoying the contrast and details in the surf. The touch of mist and slightly soft distant shore work well at focusing interest on the surf and the lighthouse.

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Hi Bill,
This is definitely a grand view featuring some wonderful wave action! I like the drama in the cloud laden sky and the mist/fog works very nicely in the BG coastline. The diagonals with the incoming surf and the cliff face add a little visual tension to this lovely scene. Nicely done; no suggestions from me.