Yellow-crowned Night Heron

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YCNH 1.jpg
YCNH 1.jpg1801×1200 1.12 MB

YCNH 2.jpg
YCNH 2.jpg1600×1200 1 MB

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Description

I saw this night heron eating what I call a sea sculpin at Ding Darling NWR on Sanibel Island last week.

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The eye membrane is partially covering the eye in the first image. I lightened it a bit. Any thoughts on that look?

Technical Details

Canon R7, 200-800mm @ 800, handheld
ISO 1600, f9, 1/5000s

Processed in DXO PureRaw 4 and Photoshop.

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2

Wonderful catch (for both of you)! And the decisive moment, for sure. Wonderful detail in the soft light. No suggestions.

3

I like the first one with the open mouth-great action shot.

4

I think that I prefer the second one Allen, the eye is clearer and the crest/feathers on the head looks a lot nicer.
Of course with number 1, catching a catcher catch the catch, is always going to be enjoyed and appreciated.
They are both really good.

5

I like Ryan’s description of the first one. Both are very good, Allen. I think your work on the eye in the first is fine. It looks quite natural to me. I’ve known people to replace the eye in that situation, but I don’t think it’s needed-it’s one of the things that makes birds so cool.

6

Wow, both are very nice, Allen. I have avoided using some of my shots that have the membrane covering the eye or part of it, but it really is a part of nature, their way of protecting their eye I guess, so I will try to remember to do what you did, and lighten the membrane part a bit if needed. The action is really good in that shot, so I think I prefer it best. Both are excellent shots. I have found the Night Heron to be very shy so to get him out in the open feeding is really good.

8

Excellent moment to capture particularly in the first image, Allen. The membrane does not bother me in the first image.