"You can tell by the way I walk..."

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Aug. 11, 9:18 AM, I was back on the Four Mile River and this Egret just walk right by me.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm & 1.4ext, f10, 700mm, -1EV, 1/1600, ISO 1600. The shot is cropped by 40%.

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You caught “the” pose for this species, Peter. It’s the one I always try for when I see them walking/stalking. It’s just incredibly elegant. The whites look spot on. and the background works nicely.

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Well captured and titled. Nice job on the whites. I like the layered look to the water and the water color. Small nit-I’d be tempted to remove the white rock.

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Hi Peter, nice catch of this striding pose. Well composed with good details and exposure. Graceful bird well captured.

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Nicely seen and captured, Peter. I was able to get out to shoot some photos of wading birds a week ago, but I haven’t edited them yet. I hope I have some as good as this.

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Hi Dennis, Allen Brooks, Allen Sparks & Shirley
Thank you for the comments, When reviewed the photo for posting the title just pop into my head.
Peter