Another Angle

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Had done enough images of this jumping spider to last me a long long time. Just at random posting some of them .
To get some thoughts on the non-standard compositions

Balan Vinod

Specific Feedback

any feedback is welcome

Technical Details

6D2, 70-200 ext raynox, flash and diffuser


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I love the lighting in this image, Balan. As for composition, I think you could stand to take a fair amount off the right as there’s a lot of empty space over there. Maybe come in so there’s about as much space to the right of the tip as there is above it.

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One of my favorite subjects, Balan. I agree with @Dennis_Plank about the composition though. I would rather see more details by bring the subject in closer, so the crops he suggested would work for me.

Great catchlight in the spider’s eyes in this one Balan. I love the dark lighting and the vivid red leaf. I agree with the suggestions for cropping from @Dennis_Plank.

Really love this! Those eyes…

Agree with Dennis’s crop suggestion

Balan: I would be good with the suggested crop but I also like this as is. Amazing how compelling those eyes are in spite of being such a small element in the frame. Top notch shot. >=))>