Another Angle

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Had done enough images of this jumping spider to last me a long long time. Just at random posting some of them .
To get some thoughts on the non-standard compositions

Balan Vinod

Specific Feedback

any feedback is welcome

Technical Details

6D2, 70-200 ext raynox, flash and diffuser


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I love the lighting in this image, Balan. As for composition, I think you could stand to take a fair amount off the right as there’s a lot of empty space over there. Maybe come in so there’s about as much space to the right of the tip as there is above it.

One of my favorite subjects, Balan. I agree with @Dennis_Plank about the composition though. I would rather see more details by bring the subject in closer, so the crops he suggested would work for me.

Great catchlight in the spider’s eyes in this one Balan. I love the dark lighting and the vivid red leaf. I agree with the suggestions for cropping from @Dennis_Plank.

Really love this! Those eyes…

Agree with Dennis’s crop suggestion