Petals with Eyes

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Just being minimalist…

6D2, 70-200, ext, raynox, f29, flash and diffuser

Balan Vinod

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any feedback is welcome

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6D2, 70-200, ext, raynox, f29, flash and diffuser


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Beautiful image, Balan. This could inspire an entire horror movie with that mostly hidden body and those four eyes just peeking out.

I love spider eyes. Seeing these with the bright catchlights is really cool!

Balan, I love how you use the smallest of apertures to get these ghostly effects. I might consider cloning out the faint leafage directly to the left of the spider, and even the bright leaf end along the left border, for added minimalism. I love the curves of the leaf it’s sitting on. Super composition too.

I love those eyes, Balan. I like the way he is peaking over the leaf. When I first looked at the image I was okay with the leaf on the left that @Mike_Friel suggested cloning out, but the more that I look at it, removing it might improve the image. I like that the leaves and surrounding area is dark, and it is all about the face and eyes of the spider. Great Shot and a wonderful subject!

Balan: A great find in great conditions. A tighter crop solves the leaf problem for me and gives the spider a touch more prominence. Top notch shot. >=))>

I like Bill’s crop, Balan, indeed now the attention goes entirely to the eyes. I think it’s a funny image… like one of the many street cameras these days… barely visible… but you are being watched! :laughing:

“I’m watching you!”
I’m wih Dennis - eeekk. I like spiders but this is a little creepy.
An usual shot - great find - well-processed and presented. i yhink Bill’s crop works well and solves that left leaf debate,
Cool image!