Candle Power 2

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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

OK, clearly not nature but certainly symmetrical. Inside the Umpqua River Lighthouse, a light that has been in continuous service for 130 years.>=))>

Specific Feedback

Took this at full focal length hand held just sticking the camera at arm’s length up into the chamber.

Technical Details

Sony A7rIII
Sony FE 16-26 f2.8 G @ 16mm
ISO 400, 1/125 @ f11.

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Bill, this is indeed both very lovely and very symmetric. However, because it’s entirely manmade and non-nature was not specified for this week’s challenge, I’m moving it to Everything Else.

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Mark: I understand. I just offered it here for fun. I had another version of this I had already posted in Everything Else. I might just delete this version.

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Hi Bill: I wouldn’t delete this, but you might change the title to something like “Another View…”. The reason I say that is that I actually prefer this composition. The long pedestal that supports the light makes a great leading line in this version that I really like.

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