Lily, Lily, Lily

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Description

Late in the water lily season and this grouping caught my eye.

Specific Feedback

I think this was a case where I should have used an ND - maybe a 3 or 4 - rather than the polarizer. Also, was disappointed in the lens drop-off, but there was no way to get a 90 degree shot on these guys and I was up high on a bridge.

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Nikon D810, 80-400 @400mm


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Hey Chris you caught a lot of fun detail in this group. I see pac-mans eating each other up everywhere, where others seem to be kissing, or laughing. Great stories to see in there!

I love that line from Blazing Saddles. Harvey Korman.

Chris: Somewhat chaotic but cool. I see the Pac Men too. >=))>

They are there. chomping away.