The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.
It’s fun to find these new (to me) plants out in the wild.
Any thoughts appreciated.
Camera: Canon R5
Lens: 100-500
Focal length: 100 mm
Shutter speed: 1/5000 (rather breezy)
Aperture: f4.5
ISO: 320
Oh these are lovely. Onion flowers are always so interesting and they make great little seed pods and things after they’re done blooming. I really like the gentle colors in this shot - quite harmonious. The tall stems give us a sense of scale and there is enough crisp detail in the flower clusters. Possibly a little more room at the top would be nice as it feels a tad cramped. I really like the center stripe up each petal - I wonder how they look under infrared…bee landing strips?
Allen, the details in the flowers and their separation from the background show them off very well. I agree that a bit more space at the top (or a slight lifting of the entire view) would be good. I do like the long stems and your choice to keep the flowers near the top of the frame.
