Water Dreams II

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Description

Another from the water lily paradise that is Lowes Water Gardens.

Specific Feedback

The BG along the bottom is a little mottled but I didn’t mind it and was too lazy to take it to black. Your thoughts?

Technical Details

Sony A7rIII
Sony FE 70-200 f2.8 GM-II, 2xTC @ 400mm
ISO 400, 1/125 @ f16

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You and these water lilies are killing me. So many variations. Your eye for composition knows no rival.

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Wow, Bill! :open_mouth:

The lighting and exposure are awesome on this one!
The yellow has a wonderful glow appearance that makes the entire lily pop.
And yep, the composition on this one is tough to top!

Excellent work, Bill!

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YIKES…gorgeous image here, Bill. Only thought for change from a less than novice macro/closeup guy like me is to clone out the leaves / lilies poking in on the right using the black water. I assume that’s a legal maneuver in this category?..just a thought for another look and no nits at all on this wonderful scene… :+1: :+1:

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Excellent composition, Bill, and I love how the yellow center seems to glow. You might be able to make that even more so with the point color adjustment in LR. It can work a little magic sometimes.

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YIKES! Sharpness, detail and colors here are off the charts! The subtle detail at the bottom is not an issue for me – it provides some grounding – but I second @Paul_Breitkreuz’ idea to prune or at least darken the leaves on the right edge. In any case this is total eye candy!!