White Gold

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Image Description

The Cascades are catching the first good snowfall of the season this weekend, so I thought I’d post a picture in celebration. (I seem to always have a fistful of photos that I think “I’ll get to someday…” Sometimes it’s because I know they will take a bit of work, but most of the time they are images that were overshadowed by others or images I’m really not sure how much I like. Plus, procrastination is a talent of mine.)

I took this image after my two buddies and I set up camp the day we arrived at White River this past February. I was trying to get supper going, but kept getting interrupted because the light on the mountain kept getting better and better. I was hoping for alpenglow to develop later, but this late light prior to that was playing a symphony of contrasts on the mountain that was enchanting to see develop; supper be d@%#&!.

Technical Details

Technical Details
NIKON Z 7II
NIKKOR Z 24-200 f/4-6.3 VR at 103 mm
1/125 sec. at f/8.0 and ISO 64

Specific Feedback

The light hitting the mountain was warm, so the camera read the original quite blue. I liked that, and originally played with that version. In the end I decided that for me this was more about the light than the color, and so converted it to black and white. I’ll post the original sidecar jpg in a comment below, and am curious if you think black and white was a good choice?

Experiencing the beauty at the end of a day like this, in the solitude and freshness that winter brings, has a “when I in awesome wonder” quality for me. I try to convey that through photography, but always fall short of what it’s like to be there. Nevertheless, I find it a worthy goal and fun to make the attempt. Does this image work in that way at all for you? Anything to change to reach that goal?

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This image was taken prior to two images that I posted earlier this year. This image was the last of the sun on the mountain, and this was the sunset after the sun’s light left the mountain.

Here’s the sidecar image that I converted for the post above:

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And for fun, here’s alpenglow at it’s peak:

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I like it. The B&W version is both fascinating and somehow ominous. I love mountains, and have seen both their splendor and their sometimes terrifying face. This image, in my opinion, contains the two natures. The dance of creation and destruction…

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And I don’t often honor the requests to leave a comment before reading the hidden information, because I’m not good at initial impressions more complex than common expletives. But this time I do have an initial impression worth at least a phrase. And it looks like the hidden information is long enough to be meaningful. And I love the other images, even the sidecar is very special.

So my initial impression is, bold, powerful and majestic!

And after reading the information, I see it was a wonderful encounter for you and your companions. I think the processing brings out “awesome wonder” and I wouldn’t change a thing. May this help bring more wonderful snow for us to enjoy this season!

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John,
My initial impression is one of great power, cold and stunning piercing light. I much prefer the B&W because I just don’t feel the power and boldness in the other two colored images. The sidecar image contains neither the bold contrast and power of the Black and white nor the soft and serene beauty of the Alpenglow. Explained another way, I would be terrified to climb the mountain in the black and white image yet in the other two it feels like far less intimidating and hikeable. Not sure that makes sense but no matter, you had terrific light to play with on this mountain and you clearly took advantage of it. Thanks for sharing these gorgeous images.

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The English philosopher Edmund Burke came up with the concept of sublime, which Kant later modified.

Sublime art is a style that aims to evoke strong emotions of awe, wonder, and even terror through its portrayal of greatness that is beyond measure, often associated with nature’s power or violent subjects.

My first impression is how Ansel Adamesque this looks. One of the great things he accomplished is to process his images in a manner suitable for the subject. Sublime subjects were made more sublime with higher contrast that include dark skies. That’s what is happening in this image as well.

The whole concept of the sublime is interesting in how well it’s been accepted and used by artists and photographers today. You see it everywhere.

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Hi John,
My initial impression was one of majestic beauty and awe, both in the light and the landscape. I find this lovely B&W to be reminiscent of some of Ansel Adams’s work. I quite like the dark moody sky and you handled the whites on the snow covered flanks of the mountain perfectly. I love the textures and details in the large version. This is a beauty. While I like your two color versions I think the B&W is more powerful.

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John, this is very striking, with the craggy, sunlit peak against the black sky, set off nicely by the shaded slopes below. The hints of snow/mist coming off the peak add a touch of mystery. I too think this is the best version. Definitely a dramatic capture of winter beauty and solitude.

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This has a classic, high contrast black and white feel to it and that’s a good thing in my book. The straightforward composition works and effectively makes the image a portrait of this beautiful mountain, especially so given the dark sky; there’s just nothing to compete with the presence of the mountain. I’ve got nothin’ but love for this one.

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Perfect in B&W. The Tone and the Light is so good… Yes COLD. I love the Sky with the interesting looking clouds. Great Image !!!

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Dear John Williams, at first sight, I am intrigued by the fragmented planes of tonalities transitioning from dark to light tones, from the foreground to the summit of the mountain.

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My initial impression is one of the raw power, strength, and beauty of the high places. Your choice to go B&W with this was the perfect choice in my opinion. I like this one a lot!

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Thank you @Antonello_Provenzale , @Diane_Miller , @David_Haynes , @Ed_Lowe , @Mark_Seaver , @Bret_Edge , @Gill_Vanderlip , @Leo_Catana , and @Tom_Nevesely !

As I noted, I don’t use Initial Reaction very often, but sometimes it’s helpful to see where an image leads the viewer.

This says better than I did the reaction I was hoping to head towards with this image.

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Gorgeous image, John. I knew it would be you, a fellow enthusiast of the White River area of Mt Hood. Your photographs always do it justice and this is no exception.

I love the shading on the foreground moraine, which gives it an almost human presence. We are seeing the mountain from its perspective, perhaps waiting for the sun to reach us too.

I greatly prefer the black and white. Looking now at your hidden comments.
ML

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