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Description
This is a second shot of the same area as my earlier post providing some idea about how much change there can be from shot to shot when the water is moving. I have now spent roughly three weeks, trying to figure out what it takes to get views with fairly large structure.
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Cropped to 4x5 from the right for more emphasis on the central figures.
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R5, 180 mm macro, 1/125 s, f/8, iso 3200, tripod, denoised in LR
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The first one was very cool but for me this one is even better! The colors work so well with the shapes to give a 3D effect and the mix of larger and smaller details creates a lot of interest to keep me exploring. Sounds like you’re getting things dialed in for a great series – looking forward to more!! (But I hope the ice series will continue this winter!)
I agree with Diane - this one has more red for more RGB balance! The LLC has more clear structure too. Though I prefer the darker green in the first shot. You nearly have a stained-glass triptych, Mark.
Mark: You’re getting better with these and I’m looking forward to even more views. Exceptionally well conceived and superbly captured and presented. >=))>
